lunes, 16 de julio de 2012

Formal Letter

Dear Sir Robert.
I am Niles your helper i Hope you remember me.I was with you at the mauler.
I am writiting this because i want to quit because i got a better job as the king`s helper.
I hope you accept my quitment and also i hope you win a lot of touraments.Ah  y almost forget, i want to got my pay that as i  was like 504  hours the last month.Also i expend a lot of money in the entrance for the mauler.I spent like 100$ per person and 50$ in the entrance and 50$ on the food.You have to pay me exactly $654.
Yours sincerely     
Niles  Robert.

2 comentarios:

  1. There are some parts in which you write informally and there are only 2 paragraphs. Be careful next time!

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